tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4207131742707406708.post2538403423833834609..comments2023-08-02T09:30:26.748-04:00Comments on Sound Like Vikert: US1Sounds Like Vikerthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00054679712482199601noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4207131742707406708.post-79829119141142110692011-03-01T16:45:53.611-05:002011-03-01T16:45:53.611-05:00Matt, you did a good job of dividing your main poi...Matt, you did a good job of dividing your main points by separating them by images rather than labeling them for each week because that makes the ideas seem more separate than they need be. One thing I would challenge you to do is provide transitional sentences between your separate paragraphs. This could be as simple as considering a word the ends at one paragraph and pick up at the beginning of the next, it helps show correlation and relationship between ideas. Otherwise, great thought process and don't shy away from putting visuals in your blog posts!Justin McNairhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04521938667662740062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4207131742707406708.post-17653245844418628552011-02-28T00:17:27.384-05:002011-02-28T00:17:27.384-05:00well done. remember to connect up the individual ...well done. remember to connect up the individual weeks into a seamless whole...and series of synthetic observations.patrick lee lucashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04150478481310659062noreply@blogger.com